Narnia France

~~A Hidden Kiss~~

After recently watching Peter Pan- the newer one- I thought I would try my luck at my first PP fanfic.

OOHH and a big thnx to thatboysahunk and cotaco_girl for helping me choose the title name

Rating:: PG-13
Main Characters:: Wendy Darling- 18
John Darling- 15
Michael Darling- 13
Peter Pan- more grown up- 18/19 maybe
Peter Pevensie- 19
Captain Hook- who knows?
(Smee-old)

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Chapter 1~ Forever Isn’t Long At All


“Have a wonderful time at the Governor’s Ball mother, you look absolutely stunning.” Mother wore a dusty rose gown embedded with tiny pearls on the bodice, the neckline encircled with crème colored lace. The gown complimented her dark, yet soft features. “Remember to look after your brothers dear, and do not go to bed too late either.” She said sweetly. “Yes mother of course. Good-night.” Mother embraced me, which is a rarity, before her and father walked off into the brisk night.

Luckily, Aunt Millicent had been gone for a social event, and left full responsibility to me. She believed that I was soon near womanhood. John and Michael were already in a deep slumber, so I turned the nightlights off for their weary eyes. I covered my mouth as I yawned, yearning to sleep myself. I climbed into my bed, the comforter bunching up my white nightgown.

That night, as I did every night, I dreamt of Peter, reminiscing. We were forever young in Neverland, dancing around ethereal faeries. It always ended with Peter saying “This is all a fantasy, this isn’t real. You and I are not….” I would toss and turn in my bed whispering loudly “We were never make believe. It was indeed real.” Beads of sweat would drip off my forehead as I clutched my pillow out of pain and the reality of Peter leaving me forever. My heart beat faster and hurt out of affliction as if chains were tightening around my tender heart.

The stained-glass window magically opened as Peter Pan gracefully flew into my bedroom. He rushed over to me as he brushed my wet hair aside my fair face, caressing my face with his fingers lightly. His very touch sent chills crawling up my spine. Every night, as he did this night, he would whisper happily “Wendy! I have come back for you!”

I opened up my eyes slowly as a smile spread across my tired face. “I have missed you dearly Peter. Please stay here…with me…forever.” He looked down at me affectionately, his eyes shining in the moonlight. He took my hand into his rough, yet tender hand as I entwined my fingers with his. “I have missed you dearly Wendy. But you know that I will not stay here. I can’t grow up….not ever.” Peter said solemnly.

In his mind, Peter knew that traveling to London was having an effect on his prolonged aging. He knew that he was older than when he first met Wendy. But not old enough to reach manhood.

I looked at Peter pained. We had these conversations every so often and I hate that they happen. I didn’t need all this unwanted stress and aggravation.

Peter smirked with a lopsided grin. He leaned in to me as our lips closed the space between us, our sweet breath mingling. As time progressed, our kiss got more intense with passion, radiating body heat. He rested his hand on my waist, pulling me closer to him, which forced me to push him against my bed. I was barely able to breath, but the touch of his lips on mine was pure heaven.

“Wendy, I think this is that feeling of love that you told me about.”

“Yes it is Peter. I feel it too.”

“It isn’t as foul as I thought it was when you first told me of it. I love you Wendy.”

My heart was beating faster, butterflies flying in my throat. That was the first time I have heard him say that. Of course, we shower each other with kisses, but he never told me his true feelings.

“I…..I love you too Peter.” I chocked out as tears of joy brimmed at the edge of my eyes.

He walked up to me and wiped the tears away. “Why do you cry? We can be happy.”

I stifled out an outburst of laughter. “Oh Peter, only you. They are simply tears of joy because I am so content Peter. I am truly happy with you and none other.”

Peter looked at me with a huge grin as he circled around my bedroom. I would have loved to join him; he is lost in happy thoughts when he flies.

While Peter was flying, I heard muffled footsteps climbing the staircase. “Peter! My parents are back- just wait outside until they leave.”

He quickly settled down on the ground and ran over to me. Before he said a word, he kissed me sweetly on my lips. “I must go….but I will come back tomorrow.” “Promise?” I asked quizzically. “Cross my love-struck heart.” And with that, he flew away, back to Neverland and the lost boys.

As Peter arrived in Neverland, flying above the pink fluffy clouds, he saw something that caught his eye. In the entrance of a Smuggler’s Cove, he saw the huge crocodile body move vertically. From under the body came Hook, the blood of the crocodile spewing onto the brown soil. “I thought he was Old, Alone and Done for? Cursed man…” Peter mumbled into the open air.

Edité par will4ever le 04/06/2006 à 04:46
Edité par will4ever le 04/06/2006 à 04:47

that was so good. I am not even being nice. I really like it and you really need to keep this one up!!!
I love the end too!!! Old alone and done for. lol
i love it1

It's incredible! i love it!

also, thanx for the credit - like i really helped - but thanx anyways!

oh yeah i just read that part! yeah thank you!! same as you coatco girl i didnt really do anything but thanks anyway!

wow that is amazing u have to carry on it is so good!

super awsome!!!!

yes i love it. when are ya gonna update huh huh huh?
kidding

life has been busy...and ill be gone most of friday so maybe sunday or staurday? idk we will see

im about halfway through writing the second chap..

but if ur lucky-- i might today!
Edité par will4ever le 08/06/2006 à 21:01

i'm lucky!

so now you have to post the next chap!

haha i bet u are...im still writing!!

GAH!!!

well you're my friend so yes i am!


well do you think you will have it done by tomorrow evening?

your my friend so u must be

well ill be gone till like 9-10 for something...so if im not too tired then yes....but no promises

9-10 in the morning?

NOO! 9-10 at night!
silly goose...

so you'll be gone until 9-10 tomorrow night?

just making sure!

yep.

so pray tht all goes well and tht i have mucho fun!

can and will do!

what wre you doing? if you dont mind me asking.

ill tell u in ur PM

okay!!!